First Time

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    First Time

    As I sit here I wonder
    How he felt to be under
    The pressure of giving in
    Not thinking of it as a sin
    For the sake of "to belong"
    He did what he knew was wrong
    He had sex for the first time
    Not even bothered by the crime
    That he had committed
    Not knowing that he also benefited
    From the disease his partner spread
    Which led
    To his quick death
    And his heart left depressed
    By : Nicole Jobi

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    GucciGurl commented on First Time

    09-30-2009

    You are very good at writting. Please continue. I can see u have a future in this. Make sure you keep all that you write and maybe you can put it in a book. But keep expressing your feelings dont act them out.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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