Almost

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    • nychi
    • is thx for the ratings and comments ...still expectin more!!! stay blessed

    Almost

     Almost
    Do you think of me
    As Destiny?
    The connection we share
    Do you even bother to care?
    How I'm feeling
    How my heart is willing
    To open to you
    With my feelings so true
    What I want you to feel
    I guess is never going to be real
    I thought love was a word that felt so great
    Decieved thinking of you as fate
    Thought you were the "one "
    While you thought of my heart as fun
    The love you had for me went off track
    I guess naive is one of the characteristics I do not lack
              To me our love was almost
        Just depended on the path you chose
                              By : Nicole Jobi

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    ShelbyRU commented on Almost

    06-01-2009

    i liked it, it seems spiteful and insightful, lol. i think you show talent because u do write about your emotions, so i would like to read more of your poetry.
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    nychi

    06/01/2009

    thx so muchh

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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