FIRST STEP

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    • is laid off and looking for work, in N.H.

    FIRST STEP

    The men of platoon 68
    though brave and true
    strive for their freedom
    by what we go through
    Standing on line
    and marching when told
    It doesnt matter
    if you are young or old
    Discipline and motivation
    from the Sgt. mentors and others
    By the things that we learn
    all of us become brothers
    If we all pull together
    and act like a team
    We are known by our strengths
    our hopes and our dreams
    Just fifty six days
    is all you will need
    Remember what we went through
    and these words you will heed.

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    koolmom0 commented on FIRST STEP

    12-24-2009

    Very good write, it flowed well and this poem has alot of meaning. I look forward to reading more of your work. Koolmom

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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