First Luv

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    First Luv

    Erasing the past, we were never going 2 last.

    Erase past, never last

    It was good, why didn't it last?

    Looking for someone who will treat me

    rite for just one nite

    The search is on better recognize

    For someone who is sweet, kind, and polite

    From stress to somewhat happiness

    Better think twice b4 u cross this dime-shaped princess

    Giving my all 2 my first luv, he will never leave my side.

    The future will take away the past if u let it.

    Take the man that is ritefully urs, no disappointment.

    Good lines can't supass the best

    Only the best 4 God's kings and qwintettes

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    Gravewave commented on First Luv

    05-30-2009

    This poem is very touching and emotional. I believe it shares the writers inner feelings and touches base with others who have deep feelings. I enjoy this writers poems and hope to read more.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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