Fear

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  • Anger
    • BEVAUC
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    Fear

    I feel my blood rushing through my veins
    I can hear every beat of my heart
    And Oh!  I can feel the pain
    Fear, fear fear from the start
    My body shakes
    Bad thoughts rushing through my mind
    My head spins, spins, and begins to ache
    Strength inside myself I MUST find.

    I tell myself to stay calm
    Soon this fear will end
    I will not allow them to do MORE harm
    My rights I WILL defend.

    On justice I will call
    These vandals will have THEIR day
    YES, YES thats the law
    The good will win -  I pray.

    The fear slowly eases away
    I give a great big sigh
    Tell myself everything is going to be ok
    I ask myself why? why? why?

    Are they bored?
    Are they mad?
    Don't they believe in the Lord?
    Yes, yes, YES! It makes me MAD MAD MAD!!!

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    FranzJ commented on Fear

    11-25-2009

    fear is a strong emotion for writing - please take a look at "Emotions as Fuel" for me thanks nice

    WordSlinger commented on Fear

    09-07-2009

    Anger is a monster its self, awoken by ingnorance, lying, betrayal, and more, So I feel ya on that. I'm curious what inspired this write???

    pjland06 commented on Fear

    07-14-2009

    I really love this poem. You as a writer can bring one right into the fear you are feeling.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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