Family

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    Family

    family, what does it feel like to have a family,
    I never had a family,
    I had a mom, and a dad,
    but on my block everything went bad,
    I wish I had, known, known, what it feels like to have a family,
    what love has to do with it, they say,
    some say it brings happiness in every kind of way,
    others say it is shown in such a maliciously way,
    so tell me what it feels like to have a family,
    does having a family, make you strong,
    does always having a family, make you get along,
    does having a family gives you a place to always call home,
    does having a family give you some kind of security, when you feel insecure,
    what does it feel like to have a family!
    I seen families, mom, dad, sister , brother,
    some was happy, but some was crappy,
    some had a life, some lost their life,
    what is your meaning of a family,
    what does it feels like to have a family,
    or is it just the word

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    Happycamper commented on Family

    06-10-2013

    I like the subject of your poem and your search for meaning of the word family. I hope you are able to experience what it is like to be a part of a strong, happy family of your own. The poem needs some work on it to make your message more coherent and to clean up some things.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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