Facilitator

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Facilitator

Feel as though
you can see through me
feel as if
you have
made your mark
upon me


it's a lie


your drink
is only
as
dazzling
as
the cup you put it in
such is life

shelter this
your vision of perfection
strap it down and pretend
you are free of infection

it's a lie
all you do is feed the bullshit


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ELRey commented on Facilitator

06-24-2009

A dark drink indeed. The disjointedness brings boldness to your score. No bullshit here You have captured a serum of truth.

WordSlinger commented on Facilitator

03-26-2009

your drink is only as dazzling as the cup you put it in such is life I like that verse

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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