Enjoy the Surf

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    Enjoy the Surf

    Stare out into oblivion
    of the golden path dancing
    toward the sun at dusk.
    Like diamonds under yellow chandeliars;
    Floating atop the choppy seas
    that lie between us.
    Once imprisoned within
    the open iron gates in a
    cathedral of loveless years.
    Saints converted;
    Conscientous thoughts diverted
    by all those wasted tears.
    Numb almost and giggling
    stupid and stoned.
    Smiling back into the faces of
    ever-smiling misery masks...
    And treading in a current of bitter past
    that just threatens to sweep me away;
    Only your current is a little stronger
    than a mountain of that.
    A storm of confusion is somewhere out at sea, babe...
    So let's just enjoy the surf.

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    bigalbi commented on Enjoy the Surf

    06-25-2009

    i love your poem i think that you have a great style keep up the good work

    charliedue commented on Enjoy the Surf

    11-17-2008

    very entertaining!! hope you keep sharing!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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