Bizarre

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    Bizarre
    Typically bizarre...
    Man in the moon was heavy
    - so was my heart;
    Didn't know what to say
    or where to start;
    Spoke not a word but said the world...
    Did you understand?
    Maybe so....
    Call on the line...
    Wasn't for me, but I spoke to him
    on the other end;
    Spoke my mind
    to a stranger I'd never met but knew so well
    - from the jail cell;
    Funny, I've never been there before...
    The room was so far above the floor....
    Amazing
    the things that are said
    when a pillow meets two heads
    behind closed doors...
    Felt so distant, but my soul was near.
    Met you today for the first time ever...
    Strange; I've known you so many years.

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    monkyntz commented on Bizarre

    06-11-2009

    so your not always pissed off don't get me wrong i love the fire in your soul. i like your style you write with a beat easy to read
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    MizBlaze

    06/11/2009

    I love the beat like I love my city streets. Perfect hold for my soul which is pretty but incomplete. Tho my rhymes I am told get real gritty when I compete..all and all I try to stay as sweet.. Cus love entwines wit passion its the fuel that makes the heat...The happy times the balance to the tears I sometimes weep. And thats DEEP...

    Spiralout1022 commented on Bizarre

    04-08-2009

    i can roll right through your piece effortlessly, so well written and i feel like im looking at a long lost friend or ex lover or something when reading, very nice
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    stormimartin commented on Bizarre

    04-08-2009

    wow, the title of this definately describes this piece. I really enjoyed reading this! deep and bizzare definately interesting. thanks for sharing!
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    1beautifullife commented on Bizarre

    11-26-2008

    I've read most of your poems and I can say that I'm definitely a fan. I was like wow! this girl is insane with the word play. you have a way of taking control of the reader. keep doing your thing. I will make sure to follow up on your page!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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