Emotionaly Fighting on my Own

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    Emotionaly Fighting on my Own

    Don't know what to say
    Don't know what to do
    I'm not what you want
    And you see it too.

    My house ain't clean enough
    My kids do what they want
    My weight ain't perfect to fit you
    My hair ain't always done
    I'm lazy
    Don't want to spend time with my kids
    I'm trifling
    Don't smell right
    Shave down there
    You cheating
    You got another boyfriend
    You're nothing
    You was raggedy
    I made you
    Forget you
    I'm leaving
    I'm tired
    I can't do it anymore
    I swear I can't
    I got other girls that want me
    You just like my ex
    Want me to be a butler
    Than leave me for the next guy
    I know I'm a good man
    But I'm tired
    I can't do this no more
    You don't cook
    Don't clean
    Don't help the kids with their homework
    I do all that
    And want to call me a lame
    You're the lame
    Talk about your job all day
    You spend more time at work
    Then you do with your own kids
    Your priorities in the wrong place....
    BLAH! BLAH! BLAH!

    If I'm that much of a problem
    You should have been gone.

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    PRober commented on Emotionaly Fighting on my Own

    07-10-2009

    heheheh, I think we've all felt this way, at one time or the other! Nicely done

    precpres

    07/10/2009

    lol. Thank you.

    JayDavid commented on Emotionaly Fighting on my Own

    04-19-2009

    The poem was hard for me to understand first time around because at first the poem rhymes then it stops after I've already programmed my mind to read it a certain way. I hate not understanding something so I read it 5 more times and I would like to say this... It is a beautiful and truthful poem. I enjoyed it!

    Joanie65 commented on Emotionaly Fighting on my Own

    04-19-2009

    strong content the truth hurts

    JadedJezzabel commented on Emotionaly Fighting on my Own

    04-18-2009

    so familiar....good write

    Drivingczar commented on Emotionaly Fighting on my Own

    04-18-2009

    Real life verses. Great write.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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