Drowning in Loves Ocean

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    Drowning in Loves Ocean

    Drowning in Love's Ocean
    by: Tiffany Danyelle

    I believe love is like the ocean
    that swallows me,
    like the hurricane over the sea.
    I'm drowning in an unbelievable
    mystery of lost happiness,
    struggling to breathe
    without
    the pain of filled lungs,
    filled with anxiety and grief,
    wondering
    when will be the next time I sink
    to the ocean's floor
    and float back to the top of
    freedom, love and being complete

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    wildpendigus commented on Drowning in Loves Ocean

    07-05-2009

    Kind of reminds me of that song Drowning In The Sea of Love long time ago would make a good song in my opion with the right production and music I know I'm a producer, writer and musician! Good Luck! I grew up in Denver,Colorado grecowong@yahoo.com

    BlaqueBeautee commented on Drowning in Loves Ocean

    12-29-2008

    very well put

    Phoenix9 commented on Drowning in Loves Ocean

    12-19-2008

    very nicely done

    Zettie commented on Drowning in Loves Ocean

    12-17-2008

    This poem is very descriptive. This poem will give you a vivid imagination.

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