Drowning in Love

0 Comments

Poem Commentary

<3 <3 <3 <3 I love you :)

Drowning in Love

I can't stand to breathe anymore. 
I don't want to.
My will left me
I was on the verge of death
and then you came
and saved me.

I was still drowning
But this time
It wasn't a fight.
The crystal waters filled my lungs
And instead of oxygen, 
the crystal liquid
love ran through my veins.

So now I enter a world of happiness
not despair.
Affection fills my mind
not hate for the world.
So thank you
for saving my life 

Poem Comments

(0)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

TheBean’s Poems (21)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Pain 0
Storm 1
Existance 1
Bleeding 0
Drowning in Love 0
Sunset, Twilight, Night/ It Will Rain 0
Silence of a Soul 2
Pride 0
Thoughts 0
Fear 0
Love 0
Heaven 0
Guilt 3
Sisters 0
Love as you wouldn't think of it 3
Confusion 2
Roses 1
Thunderstorm(
haiku)
2
White Tiger 2
Mighty Mountain 0
Sunset 1