Devour

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  • Sadness
    • EmilyYvonne
    • Love is an irresistible desire to be irrisistibly desired

    Devour

     There was a time i'd given anything to smile
    Now id give anything to go back to that time
    I'd do anything now to stop crying
    I need a cig that will slowly kill me
    I wonder why I crave something that'll keep me alive
    I'm not hopeless, I just ran out of dreams
    Laugh all you want, It never saved anyone
    But if you were dying of thirst you'd devour my tears
    Id devour your pain too if I had the chance

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    Crush commented on Devour

    04-30-2010

    you shine such a bright light on what lies beneath...this is hard to do. i loved this very much , especially, " i'm not hopeless, i just ran out of dreams". wonderful and an easy, easy ten from "crush."
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    Artie commented on Devour

    04-30-2010

    Wow this is crazy good! I like how you worded this. You show inner turmoil in a new light - 10 from me
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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