Deborah My Lynne

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    Deborah My Lynne
    Ah, "Do you love me?" you say? Bleeding heart
    of that I cherish doth my love impart!
    Abysmal fire is burning deep within
    a dream of you, O Deborah my Lynne.

    An ocean billows sunny days and then,
    Reflecting shiny waters back of when
    our sparkling romance that our love have been!
    I always love you, Deborah my Lynne.

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    dumplin commented on Deborah My Lynne

    12-03-2009

    Lucky girl, no doubt! This is a very nice style of writing! Loved it! Please read some more of my work. Especially the ones I just posted. Thanks for your comments.
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    JacLiz2 commented on Deborah My Lynne

    09-14-2009

    Please feel free to leave comments for my poems at : http://www.originalpoetry.com/poet/jacliz2
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    JacLiz2 commented on Deborah My Lynne

    09-14-2009

    This is very nice and from the heart. A true feeling of love for someone.
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    MizBlaze commented on Deborah My Lynne

    11-14-2008

    This is nice...
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    IntensorPoet commented on Deborah My Lynne

    10-30-2008

    This is my first iambic pentameter poem.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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