Death

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    Death

    Lying there breathless
    No movement,
    Silence
    Wires hooked to machines
    No movement,
    Silence
    I touched his hand
    No movement,
    Silence
    I hear a loud buzz
    Doctors rush in
    Everyone is screaming
    I see th sheet being pulled over his body
    No movement,
    Silence
    The doctors walk me to my car
    Where i sit
    No movement,
    Silence...

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    Merrilyn commented on Death

    03-25-2009

    Oh sweetheart i wish there was something i could say to you that mattered, the only thing i can say is your stronger than i would be able to be i LOVE your writing very strong and deep i give you a 10 for sure

    alejapoet commented on Death

    03-05-2009

    This is such a reality my friend and you will realize that people can't handle the truth. We all must die someday and we all will face pain-trials and tribulations. Keep writing what is real and true, Love it! I believe and admire poems from the heart and of where we have been and where we are going now from all the pain-lies and disappointments. We survive-We live and we are strong. Author Aleja Bennett http://alejabennett.net84.net http://myspace.com/authoralejabennett

    Drivingczar commented on Death

    02-27-2009

    I feel your hurt and pain deeply.

    chadallac74 commented on Death

    02-26-2009

    I don't know who left you a "1", but I left you a "10." Nice work... the ending left me in shock.

    crisanta commented on Death

    02-22-2009

    hi,ur poem is deep. it makes u think. i liked it.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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