Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

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    Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

     This is a sick world
    when men and women, seduce
    mere children, today !

       Chrisjan

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    speed11935 commented on Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

    06-23-2009

    It is a sick world, but don't blame Jesus. In fact He is the only hope for this world
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    Chrisjan

    06/24/2009

    It is a prayer to Jesus!From Adam + Eve, we're to blame, we know the Word, but how many listen, ya' know. Thanks for your

    wheelsal commented on Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

    06-12-2009

    Another Haiku poet. H T is an expert so listen closely but remember allow it to be fun. Would love to read more from you soon.
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    HarverTomsson commented on Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

    06-03-2009

    Not classical haiku, but an insight after all. lines one and two qualify, line three could be rewritten to comply. The last is the result of the the activity in line two. My suggestion: short eyes left unloved.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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