Dazzling Beauty

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    Dazzling Beauty

     

     The dazzle of beauty makes pride escape the shackles of emotional captivity.

    It sets free from fear of following the path of ones heart.

     

    I’m dazzled by her beauty. My admiration for her is greatly aroused. The dazzle of her beauty has cut through the walls of my doubt and fears. Am set free – Free to follow my heart and fully express myself to her.

     

    My heart is burning with love. Everything about me is wrapped in her dazzle. All I can see and feel is the fire of her dazzle. I have lost my senses.

     

    Now she thinks am strange and so we have become strangers. She does not realize that it is her dazzle that makes me act strange. I want to get close to her. I am eager for her.

     

    Am ready to forsake my pride and surrender to the magnificence of her dazzle. I have lost myself in her beauty.

     

    In the silence of love- In the beauty of her dazzle, I wait with silent passion the day she will open the way for me.

     

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    MOMofTWINS commented on Dazzling Beauty

    10-30-2009

    Very beautiful... Your verbage especially in the first few lines is amazingly catching. I like that the end is a little bit of a suprise in that you dont get this woman but that you must wait for her, it puts a nice twist in the piece. I think you did a great job in writting this...

    andrchikonde

    10/30/2009

    Thank you very much.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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