Crows Feet

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Crows Feet


crows feet

crow's feet covered with snow
watching I see him strutting slow
walking on the frozen ground
why doesn't he just fly around
does he mind the icy feel
looking for his breakfast meal
rooting here pecking there
he doesn't really seem to care
finding a crumb of who knows what
in the McDonald's parking lot...
I turn my head up towards the sky
against my face the snowflakes fly
now it is my turn to know
crow's-feet covered with snow
(I love those laugh lines!)


©Linda Renzulli

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DEEBOE2008 commented on Crows Feet

09-14-2009

this is very beautiful and toughching poem and if i ever need a helping hand i will deffanitly give you a chant

SavVySam commented on Crows Feet

08-21-2009

This is perfect in its flow and simplicity. Love the ironic humor at the end! Good work!

Crush commented on Crows Feet

07-07-2009

this is special, i really like it. i felt like i was there in the cold with the crow...lol. thanks for sharing.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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