Crimson Snow 4-12-2010

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    I know its terrible and sad.. its an old poem..

    Crimson Snow 4-12-2010

     You say you love her all the time
    then you sit there like a mime
    Never speaking a single word
    Never a sound to be heard
    The silence drab and dreary so
    Fills my lonely body with woe
    The girl that you used to know
    has decided she wants to die in the snow
    You ignore her, leave her, deny she exists
    So she runs crying to enflict pain on her rist
    You love her you do you now know
    Only your love she cannot feel
    She sits in the snow
    cutting her wrists, wishing the pain to heal
    You run, run, run looking for the one.
    The one you call your rising sun.
    You finally find her as you drop down low.
    You see your love lying in a pool of blood
    in the now crimson snow
    Your eyes well up with tears
    You finally realize all your fears
    You grab your love up in your arms
    wishing to protect her from harm
    YOu run like wind to the hospital
    Hoping that your love will live through it all
    You sit beside her hoping she'll survive
    You let your mind take a dive
    You leave for only a split second to be aline and cry
    And return back just in time to see your true love die.. 

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