CRAZEE

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    • PJLSFO
    • What I am doing right now is, 'missing Patrice'... This status will never, ever change.

    CRAZEE

    ....is how you make me feel, at first uncomfortable and in the end
    it's no big deal. an emotional roller coaster-ride taking me far and wide,
    through one ear and out the other side.. giving me feelings I cannot hide...you are within my blood, but never in my soul. you shattered the puzzle that I took so long to build and instead you deny it...

    you thrive on pressure, but you leave the truth behind...fear is within my grasp although I cannot hold it, i feel the pain inside..motionless. my mind flows to the music of my mind..

    and in my mind I feel safe and sound. here, no one and nothing can enter.. only MY thoughts and the air that I breathe.


    Patrice Carolyn Lekas
    1989-2007

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    WriterGenevieve commented on CRAZEE

    10-16-2010

    Thank you for sharing this poem written by your daughter. It is her real raw thoughts and feelings at that time in her life. It is a great poem.

    JoshMan commented on CRAZEE

    12-14-2008

    Nice

    PJLSFO

    06/21/2009

    thank you for your comment and for reading it..as you can tell, I rarely access this site like i used to but seem to be getting some interest back..thanks again

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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