~Castle in the Sky~

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Dedicated to the Insane Clown Posse for offering me a ticket to the dark carnival. The lessons learned there are a part of who I am today. What is a Juggalo~ The World May Never Know~ Peace~ James

~Castle in the Sky~

~Castle in the Sky~
(Dedicated to ICP)

We’re all searching for direction

Upon these paths we roam

While trying to find instructions

That will lead us back to home

 

I have drifted on the oceans

Where a lot of men have drown

Until I heard the wisdom

Of 2 insane juggalo clowns

 

They spoke of the atrocities

That we live with everyday

I've heard them speak of the sickness

It seems will never go away

 

They talk about a lot of things

We've tried to hide in shame

They try to tell each one of us

That inside we’re all the same

 

They emerged from the inner city

From a place we call the hood

They rose out of the middle

Between life’s bad and good

 

Described a land called Shangri-La

As a castle in the sky

And a long remembered promise

They made to a butterfly

 

They told the world they’re wicked

So some won't understand

But everything’s now going

Just exactly as they planned

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ayyan commented on ~Castle in the Sky~

10-09-2010

A good poem teaches many by the way of writing about the castle in the sky - I like the words "but everything's now going - Just exactly as they planned" as it is true and finely said. -ayyan dj-

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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