Captain of my Fate (from "Invictus")

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    "Those that do not learn from history, are doomed to repeat it."
    George Santayana

    Captain of my Fate (from "Invictus")

    I am the Captain of my fate
    My hand firmly on the wheel
    I care not if a storms ahead
    Or if warning bells all peal;
    That danger lurks ahead
    The sea is at its worst
    I shall defeat the tempest
    Though others met its curse
    For I am the exception
    I am not like lesser men
    It matters only where I go
    And not where you have been
    You warn me of the course ahead
    It matters not to me
    For I am the exception
    And shall defeat  this raging sea
    My course is set and shall not change
    I will surely beat this gale
    It matters not the bow is crushed
    And tatters are my sail

    The wreckage lies upon the shore
    The Captain has been bested
    He would not heed the warnings
    Of others who've been tested
    A battered spirit barely rose
    From the wreckage on the beach
    And those who warned him heedlessly
    Salvage all that they can reach
    For deafened ears that would not heed
    The danger warnings told
    A young brave sailor such as he
    Would not listen to the old
    Bad experience told to him
    And still he made the choice
    To heed his youth and ego
    And squelch that nagging voice
    And now he seeks the help of those
    Whose words he would not heed
    And so, like every mortal soul
    He finds out that he bleeds

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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    ramblingrose’s Poems (12)

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