Can You Save Me?

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    Can You Save Me?

    Can you save me?
    Even if there's nothing left to save?
    Even if it's so deep down you can't find it?
    What if it was never there in the first place?
    What do you do then?
    Dig deeper? Try to fill the gap?
    What if you can't, what then ?
    Will you leave just like everyone else ?


    Can you save me?
    Probably not but please just try.

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    PRober commented on Can You Save Me?

    07-09-2009

    great write, and a plea we all have from time-to-time! Write on!
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    RHPeat commented on Can You Save Me?

    06-18-2009

    Once, I knew a fine song, —It is ture, belive me,— It was all of birds, And I held them in a basket; When I opened the wicket, Heavens! they all flew away. I cried: "come back little thoughts!" But they only laughed. They flew on Until they were as sand Thrown between me and the sky. . . . by Stephen Crane/// You poem reminds me of a lot of his work. It has a bitter taste yet you have to read it through.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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