BUTTERFLY

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    BUTTERFLY

    Today I saw a butterfly.... It reminded me of you... Rich with bold colors of black, yellow and blue.

    It's wings were strong with a span as wide as the open sea...soaring and floating like air to explore life's pleasantries....

    Tasting each flowers necture and quenching your thirst with their dew...I wonder if any, will truly satisfy you...

    You once rested upon me and gather my nectar and dew...then you flew away to continue on your journey, as all butterflies do...

    As you glide across the desert sands and the seven seas...If it be Gods will, you'll fly your back to finally rest forever upon me.

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    Beetle726 commented on BUTTERFLY

    11-23-2009

    Amazing pice of work. Others that don't see, will see your verse. Loved what yo had to say and how it was presented. So well written, much emotion. Could not have said better.

    zeebaby

    11/23/2009

    Thanks for the feedback. Been busy but have some more soon to come.

    Kdaddy commented on BUTTERFLY

    10-27-2009

    A nice poem and I love the message within it. Had a good flow to it.

    zeebaby

    11/23/2009

    Thanks for the feedback..Been busy got more to come!!!

    RJK commented on BUTTERFLY

    10-27-2009

    Never looked at a butterfly that way. Nice brain pitcher. Is the butterfly your X? Just wondering

    zeebaby

    11/23/2009

    Hey you feelo me & yes it was. But there is a sequel watch 2 c how it turns out!! more to come.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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