BURSED

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BURSED

You left with no warning
not even a letter
just to jump broad and elope with her
and the funny thing is
I was there
When you was laid up in a hospital bed
in acing pain for weeks
I still remained true
With a busted lip
bruised up arms and legs
and a blackened eye
I never left your side
Even when you beat me til I bleed
then raped me and made me give you head
And after a few months of sickness
my breast and stomach begin to swell
I love and trusted you
but all you could do was use me as a punching bag
But that was then
try it now
The tables have turned
now its your turn to feel what i felt
All the pain, tears, and lonely nights
hows married life?
And for our child
he's doing alright
After all that you think I'ma take you back
Just take that beating form your wife.

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Prettypoetcindy commented on BURSED

09-21-2009

You hang in there Aneesha!! I believe in karma and I believe in "what goes around comes around". You are a very strong woman, don't ever let ANY man take that from you. He did you a favor by leaving, you are way too good for him and someday you will find "real" love and know in your heart that a real man never lays a hand on a woman except with a gentle touch. Peace and Love, Prettypoetcindy

chubbc commented on BURSED

09-15-2009

wow thats deep very painful but good poem tho i like the form you put it in and if its a tru story then i must say thats a messed up thing to have happen but nice work i like it my fave part was when the tables were turned

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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