broken

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    • kutiespie
    • i love love but love seem not to love me so why is it we chase for something that we can never grasp

    Poem Commentary

    it a very well thought prospective what i see in myself and how my life is

    broken

     i,m afraid of being hurt agian
    to feel the pain i always feel
    beacuse i'm me that who i'm always going to be is me
    for a fact you don't like me beacuse im a rag doll with black hair and brown eyes sexy combnation  right but im still broken
    with two working legs and bretheing lungs but i wonder what ive done
    to make me this sad i am broken
    arent you glad  see my tears and my fear beacuse i am broken
    but i  can fly without another person to steer
    beacuse i am broken

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    jamie7121f commented on broken

    12-15-2010

    Hmm. I see this poem with potential, but it would be more enticing to read if the grammar and punctuation was revised. I like it though. :)
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    Desmeii commented on broken

    12-15-2010

    Hi kutiespie once again I enjoyed your poetry,well done.They're short but who said good poetry is long cos it isn't.You're straight to the point & I really like it,keep writing...peace,Shirl
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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