BRING THEM HOME

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    DEDICATED TO THE HURT I HAD IN THE PAST

    BRING THEM HOME

    I WISH I COULD BE THEIR TO WIPE AWAY THEIR TEARS,
    I WISH I COULD BE THEIR TO TAKE AWAY THEIR FEARS,
    I KNOW HOW SCARED THEY MUST BE,
    IN THEIR HEARTS DO THEY REALLY HATE ME,
    I THINK ABOUT THEM ALL THE TIME,
    I CAN'T WAIT FOR THEIR CALL TO SAY THEY ARE FINE,
    OH
     MY HEART BREAKS MORE AND MORE EVERYDAY,
    PLEASE DEAR JESUS BRING THEM HOME SHOW ME THE WAY!

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    christy73 commented on BRING THEM HOME

    02-12-2010

    it could be about the war to never thought about it that way ....huh...cool..ty
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    christy73 commented on BRING THEM HOME

    02-12-2010

    ty for your feed back...it was about my kids i lost them over my selfish ways (drugs) a long time ago ,but i got them back a couple of years ago to ....just alot of heartaches back then...ty
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    kage commented on BRING THEM HOME

    02-11-2010

    not sure what this is about i thought maybe soldiers in the war ? but anyway it is good and well thought out nice wording
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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