Breaking Point

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    Breaking Point

    Calm, cool, collective as viewed
    Externally soothed is usual news

    So sick of living life in contempt
    Ridiculed daily and never exempt

    Able to bundle and hide all emotion
    Until this day it was held as a token

    The tide has changed, though may be different tomorrow,
    Now is the time to release all sorrows

    Endless days of built up anger
    Myself unknown as that of a stranger

    No longer concerned with the idea of reason
    Considered a rebel, born guilty of treason

    Frustration and anger, emotions now joint
    For I have reached my breaking point.

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    Robb08 commented on Breaking Point

    03-23-2009

    great stuff on this son.

    Nebiyah71 commented on Breaking Point

    12-25-2008

    Snap...Snap...Snap... I thoroughly enjoyed participating in this peom. It was it's own literary work of art. I enjoyed the rhythmic flow you used to portray the images of your emotions as well as the rhythm of the words you choice to deliver your sto

    MizBlaze commented on Breaking Point

    11-19-2008

    I feel ya man...sometimes it gets just almost too much to take...

    ivecute77 commented on Breaking Point

    11-19-2008

    i loved that one, great poem

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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