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    I pray for a moment

    i’m screaming out loud

    god if YOU’RE out there

    please help me now

     

    never this low

    this low before

    has this life pushed me

    down to the floor

     

    i fell to the bottom

    i crashed right on through

    throw me a lifeline

    show me some truth

     

    show me some sunlight

    give me some hope

    don’t let me die here

    throw me a rope

     

    give me a chance

    to prove it all wrong

    give me the strength

    to stand and walk on

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    Tempestlady commented on Bottom

    02-07-2011

    Been there, called and got an answer. Not always the answer i wanted, but always later found out why. I would like to read a poem about what got you there in the first place. A wonder piece of work and very inspirational. Write on.....and remember, sometimes unanswered prayers and one of God's greatest gifts. ....................................Tlady
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    ahardwalk commented on Bottom

    02-05-2011

    I'm hoping you found your strength cause hitting rock bottom can take its toll on anyone beautiful write!
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    Teardrops commented on Bottom

    02-05-2011

    Your strength i s your writings they are wonderful , from the heart and great . This is a winner in any contest Marie
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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