Bermuda Grass

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Bermuda Grass




As I stood up
I felt it and recalled taking it off
To soothe my hands with fragrant lotion.
Nonchalantly,
I watched it tumbling down,
Forever
Slipping out of reach
Deep in the underbrush of Bermuda Grass
And I thought,

`I can come back later, with a metal detector,
If not,
It is a good place,
For the anniversary ring
That meant to him only another
Opportunity
For an outward show to feign affection'.

I can still see it fall,
And could make quite a spectacle
Describing it's descent and final resting place,
Swallowed by the luxuriant sponge.

But I shall not!
Be as flamboyant as he was in presenting it as a
Display,
Not intimately.

Still,
As I drive past,
I sometimes glance
For I do know the spot by the curb;
I do not stop.

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Tempestlady commented on Bermuda Grass

07-19-2009

Me too. I coulg g back and look, but i don't. Good write... just a little more rhyme would have suited me better. Write on....

hdmac commented on Bermuda Grass

06-16-2009

A little confused at the ending of the poem. Are you passing by the same area where you lost the ring?

suezqt7

06/16/2009

Yes, It happened at a place I drive by occassionally. Sometimes I think of renting a metal detector, but the ring is not a happy memory so I do not stop but all the memories come rushing back...

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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