BE STILL

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    Poem Commentary

    Self realization

    BE STILL






    Hush, but listen
    To whispers, of silence
    Journeys' set to begin
    Escape, worries, fears, violence
    Seek peace, feel joy, within


    Be still, or truly, miss
    Voice, beckoned, with each call
    Release the  power
    But, ones' choice
    Message, written, upon own soul

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    suzystars commented on BE STILL

    07-25-2009

    Our soul is the gateway to God. There are a lot of obstacles thrown our way in this mortal existence. If we look passed them with open souls our time here will be justified. I thank you again. You have an open gateway to our maker, but most of all you have a special talent of communicating that knowledge to others.
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    Refuge52 commented on BE STILL

    07-17-2009

    I like the way you write, you write from the soul. You can tell when a poet is writing from their heart.
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    DESIRE2INSPIRE

    07/17/2009

    Thanks for the feedback...always nice to hear positive comments :)

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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