awake

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awake

Waking up for the first time,
I see a world so devine.
A force that makes the flowers bloom,
The essence thats in me and you.
Clarity of who you are,
Shing like the brightest star.
For the first time you live,
Thankfully awake you give.
Opening your heart to the power you hold,
Creating your life where miracles unfold.
Let it all in step out and play,
Be here and now in this moment today.

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magicmanzz commented on awake

02-05-2009

nice job i like the way you write

bjroach55 commented on awake

12-17-2008

this is the best of what i have read so far you go for it...

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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