Awake

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  • Confusion

    Awake

    Today as alone as I could be
    There stands nothing but emptiness
    My head speaks of nothing but chaos
    Confused and dejected
    With nothing but loneliness at the tip of my toungue
    My heart is trembling with fear and shaking tiredness
    Take me there to where you are
    Whatever beautiful place
    Whatever love you are surrounded by
    This sea of love you are in
    Please wrap me in that place
    In your heart, speak to me of tenderness
    For I will do nothing but miss you and
    this bliss

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    Jen2le commented on Awake

    04-22-2009

    very nice, more like prose, it is very expressive of your experience

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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