Ask out...

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    Ask out...

    You start to walk toward me
    I stare at the ground
    You start talking to me
    I just look around
    You're finally asking me out
    I can't hear a sound
    You ask me again
    I fell my heart pound
    You smile down at me
    I look up and frown
    You ask me "Whats wrong?"
    I say, "I'm no one's rebound"

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    KingGeorgeII commented on Ask out...

    03-11-2009

    Very nice poem. Simple and to the point. Check out my book website (www.LifeisHurricanes.com) When you are ready to publish some poems Holla! Big G.

    poeticlyricist1 commented on Ask out...

    01-16-2009

    Ok...I totally agree. Cute poem.

    Phoenix9 commented on Ask out...

    12-24-2008

    very well done

    allenjermy commented on Ask out...

    12-24-2008

    i like how you wrote this one, changed it up.Very good...Don Folks

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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