Are You There?

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Are You There?

Hello, hello I can hear me say Is this the way we're going to play?

I hear my voice it is coming your way but you don't hear me it has been this way.

Words I am speaking just breezing by. I don't think that you heard me? Looking stupidly why?

Hello hello don't you care what I speak aren't you listening to me has it gotten this bleak?

If you were to  listen you would hear me say I love you tommorrow as much as today. That the sun comes around you whenever you are near and that I am glad that I met you and I am glad that your here. That our friendship has grown like a seed in the land. This wasn't how I wanted us this was not in my plan.

Hello Can you hear me I am letting you know! I am telling you things that you said I would never show!

Deaf ears are upon me Closing out what I need you to hear I am letting you know that  do really care!

Hello Hello are you there? I will go now Just want it you to know I was here.





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jesusfreake commented on Are You There?

10-14-2009

awww this is so sweet and and beautifully written....i give u two thumbs up because hardly anyone writes about a subject like this and i think its totally unique and awesome....so 10 all the way for me

Ceelee

10/18/2009

thanks really i appreciate it

cliftondurant commented on Are You There?

10-14-2009

if he didnt hear you it's his lost a nice sweet poem enjoy the read

Ceelee

10/18/2009

Thanks clifton appreciate that..I just as sweet though! Smiled Thanks again

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