ardency...

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    ardency...

    ardency...







    one day..

    while she were in front of her mirror..

    she saw another woman in that mirror..

    standing and sharing her the same mirror..

    got very angry to that woman whom shared her the same mirror..

    gave up to her anger...

    to smash so hard that mirror...

    to fly apart many pieces of that mirror..

    she realized then...

    that she got alot of women...



    by: hazem02@yahoo.com

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    monica83 commented on ardency...

    07-10-2009

    Good work hazem..i liked the simplicity..keep penning ur innermost feelings..thats poetry.
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    Chaos128 commented on ardency...

    07-06-2009

    Hazem, this is the purest form of poetry - capturing the moment and preserving it - objectively. You have a few grammatical errors but that's really unimportant. To achieve the effect you've created in this work (in a language not your own) is a phenomenal accomplishment. Keep it up, brother. I'll give you a ten for the effort alone!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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