An Ending

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  • Lost Love
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  • Sadness
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  • Confusion

    Poem Commentary

    i wrote this poem after my ex broke up with me.

    An Ending

    I hate this feeling of hurt

    a looming presence of love

    as it takes hold of my soul

    fear and confusion becoming my breath

    not able to break this last hold

    i cry out my sanity

    praying for a bit of humanity

    watching my heart slip away

    yet i am still whole

    once i am free i'll be in peace

    then will i truelly be me

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    Angel197038 commented on An Ending

    07-03-2009

    I truly love this write as it reminds me of not only what I have been through but also what my best friend is going through and you are so very right in every word that you state here! I love your honesty and flow of this write. Thanks for sharing....hugs and God Bless, Helen
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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