Amazingly enough

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Amazingly enough


swift wind blows over the chillen air
voices crying in the atmosphere
an aerie reminder of an orphan age
put the new fantasies in this old dear

lonely bliss carries this youn'ged heart
blackened by the draft of that cold dance
hunting by the eyes of her beauty
lost in the remiscence of her romance

running from her bossom's core
lift by the uncertain dreams
weakened when the hour comes close
the nights feels colder than it ever seems

eyes wide shut, but yet awake
glued in the endless days
drifting by the dreaful memories
of stolen heart that hasen't fade

amazingly enough, the cold had chilled
joy has blasted in the air
eyes wide shut, but yet awake
and taken with the moment that was their

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1990lh commented on Amazingly enough

09-15-2009

grea poem enjoyed reading it love the style u used, nice work

cmlestrade commented on Amazingly enough

09-04-2009

This is written beautifully. Reminds one of a bygone era via it's lanquage , meter and rhythm. I enjoyed it very much.

setter commented on Amazingly enough

08-26-2009

Great poem almost from an age past long ago. an era we are not ease to learn from. It really is a great poem. Bill

Moveme

09/02/2009

Thank you. i Originally wrote this poem for a movie script.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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