Amazingly enough

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    Amazingly enough
    swift wind blows over the chillen air
    voices crying in the atmosphere
    an aerie reminder of an orphan age
    put the new fantasies in this old dear

    lonely bliss carries this youn'ged heart
    blackened by the draft of that cold dance
    hunting by the eyes of her beauty
    lost in the remiscence of her romance

    running from her bossom's core
    lift by the uncertain dreams
    weakened when the hour comes close
    the nights feels colder than it ever seems

    eyes wide shut, but yet awake
    glued in the endless days
    drifting by the dreaful memories
    of stolen heart that hasen't fade

    amazingly enough, the cold had chilled
    joy has blasted in the air
    eyes wide shut, but yet awake
    and taken with the moment that was their

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    1990lh commented on Amazingly enough

    09-15-2009

    grea poem enjoyed reading it love the style u used, nice work
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    cmlestrade commented on Amazingly enough

    09-04-2009

    This is written beautifully. Reminds one of a bygone era via it's lanquage , meter and rhythm. I enjoyed it very much.
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    setter commented on Amazingly enough

    08-26-2009

    Great poem almost from an age past long ago. an era we are not ease to learn from. It really is a great poem. Bill
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    Moveme

    09/02/2009

    Thank you. i Originally wrote this poem for a movie script.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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