A penny for a lonely soul

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    A penny for a lonely soul

    Despite the plots at hand
    My heart grow stronger by the minute,
    Despite my sundry soul
    Joy burst into the air.
    Feeling out of despair
    This makes my feeling's stronger
    And out of the murky clay-
    I reach out of hunger.
    I scream out of this place
    And run into everlasting eternal,
    I stand steadfast with this plan
    Running from my pain's inferno.
    Despite the plots at hand, yes my love for her go stronger
    And despite my sundry soul
    My feet will run this journey further.

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    Savant commented on A penny for a lonely soul

    11-02-2009

    After reading this I saw the image of a man running the 110 hurdles and a question came to mind.... why isn't there a hurdle at the very end of the race? It's because obstacles are not meant to end your journey. After reading it a few times this piece grew on me. I like the strength that it suggests. Run on brother!
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    Moveme

    11/02/2009

    Thank you for that wonderful comment Savant. You shed a darkness in a place where I haven't had a light to shed upon. Thanks for the Revelation

    cmlestrade commented on A penny for a lonely soul

    09-11-2009

    This was absoutely great, It was so well written with such a subtle hint of ontrique.
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    Moveme

    09/11/2009

    wow i am so flattered. I see that you are a woman who sees and hear more intricately than Mose.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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