Alone

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    Alone

    I am all alone with no one to help me in this hell i call life

    I need someone to tell me that it will get better

    I need someone to help me carry on, when i cant carry on by myself

    But i have no one to do that for me

    No one truley understands what i go through day after day

    I get overwhelmed and thats when my true feelings show

    Most of the time my feelings are shut off to the rest of the world,
    I am alone in hell
    waiting and wanting  yearning for the one to help me through it all
    I think i found the one to help me
    So far nothing has happened 
    For now i am alone and scared

                                        ALONE in hell!

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    awelsh39 commented on Alone

    08-23-2009

    I would like to say this is very deep. You have alot of good emotion when writing and that is good. I would like for you to recommend some of your other poems for me to read.
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    stoneddora

    03/18/2010

    read all my poems i dont rele have a favorite to tell u the truth i rele dont think any of them are that good

    jmschwartz commented on Alone

    06-05-2009

    this reminds me of a poem i wrote when i was 17. and i remember that that is exactly how i felt, and sometimes still feel. i guess it comes with the territory of being a writer. we feel things fully, not halfway.
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    stoneddora

    06/06/2009

    rele thats kool :) and yea i guess

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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