Alone in your Bed

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    Alone in your Bed

    Your lying alone in your bed. Picture
    this, there's a million things
    running through your head.
    one you just cant forget,
    that smile,that hug, that hair,
    that voice, those eyes,
    you sigh. Hugging
    your knees up to your chest
    memories come rushing to your head.
    you feel his arms around you,
    you feel safe and loved
    nothing can ruin that single moment
    then you open your eyes
    and remember its pretend, just
    another night alone in your bed.

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    FranzJ commented on Alone in your Bed

    11-22-2009

    your time will come when you are not alone in your bed -nice

    Qualin commented on Alone in your Bed

    07-30-2009

    mush of that you wont be sleeping alone as far as that goes sleeping period ..wimpers...crying..dipers....handeling it in most cases alone...glad it's pretend think on good things love peace joy.... qualin

    Rainz commented on Alone in your Bed

    04-03-2009

    I enjoy sleeping alone, in the dark. Its where privacy is at its best. the only exception is that special someone. great work, once again!

    TERESA0519 commented on Alone in your Bed

    03-27-2009

    Good flow

    origionalmerlin commented on Alone in your Bed

    03-21-2009

    well it isnt a SSDD good form nice flow and good imagry.

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