Abduction

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    Abduction

    My stomach drops as I lay in bed
    A strong urge to tear down my curtains
    leads me to a complete view of our solar system
    Planets and time whiz by
    Not afraid but I wonder where I'm headed
    and what is guiding me
    I begin to wonder if I'm alone on this journey
    and am answered with the long line of houses, condos, vehicles, and apartments
    leading into a black hole
    Too much mystery to be surprised by whatever happens next
    I'm going back to bed
    Until a knock at the door
    Until I cease to exist

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    origionalmerlin commented on Abduction

    04-08-2009

    good imagry and word choice..

    ghostt88 commented on Abduction

    12-06-2008

    A great atmospheric image.

    ivecute77 commented on Abduction

    11-23-2008

    nice poem,

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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