A United States Marine

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    A United States Marine

    Walking in hot sand, carrying his gear,
    He quietly thinks, of family back home.
    He hasn't seen them in over a year,
    He walks on, his destination unknown.

    Getting caught in the enemy's fire,
    A Marine falls as he tries to shoot back.
    His will to live, a burning desire,
    Calling for help, he grabs his buddy's pack.

    Marines fire their guns, twenty-one times,
    As the fallen Marine is put to rest.
    People cry as they recite their last lines,
    And pin a gold medal onto his chest.

    Now I am weeping in my long black dress,
    For a US Marine, who tried his best..

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    MikeDomino commented on A United States Marine

    05-21-2014

    They always do their best for those who don't - they do their duty for failed policy . They are Marines . The best we have .

    SavVySam commented on A United States Marine

    09-12-2010

    Words of sorrow penned beautifully in honor of the many similar true stories, or maybe a special one..either way excellent! My Grandfather,brother, and sister all were Marines...A special breed apart!

    justme8495 commented on A United States Marine

    06-18-2009

    your poemare awsome.. they get into the heart and mind and you can see what is going on in them.. Keep wrighting more

    mykhail commented on A United States Marine

    02-08-2009

    HOOOAHHH!!

    PunoAngulus commented on A United States Marine

    02-04-2009

    Visualization and the emotion and the feeling are very vivid. Your work is grand. beautiful.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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