A Purple Rose

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    A Purple Rose

    When will this battle end?
    I've been fighting with everything I got
    Now there's not
    A whole lot
    Of force left in me.
    I'm tired of my enemies
    Siphoning my feminine energy
    I've been wounded and my spirit has been drained
    I breathe in life to only regurgitate pain
    I nurture weakness as it leaves
    My being
    My temple
    My soul.
    I visualize a day when I'll once again feel whole
    Not shattered emotionally reeking of a time long ago
    This battle seems to grow stronger
    With each passing moment
    With each passing hour
    I'm such a rare fragile flower
    That's evolving into a being that is so rare!
    Daily my heart bloom a bouquet of purple roses of despair

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    redbloodink commented on A Purple Rose

    06-21-2010

    You can be renewed in Christ every day and your weekness He can remove with His strength i you let Him so you can stand....... red
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    shennia

    06/23/2010

    This poem is basically the pain I see around from women who struggle through emotional pain it's not entirely my own pain.

    california commented on A Purple Rose

    07-06-2009

    What a descriptive, passionate poem...... this is one of the VERY best ones I have yet to find on this site. Hope you keep writing, you have a great talent. Expressing a lot, in not so many words.......
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    shennia

    06/23/2010

    Thank you, God bless and I will continue to write on this site.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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