a place beyond here

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    a place beyond here

    we have come this way before wanting to meet ever the more
    the night has come and we have missed the sun
    meeting like this is really getting old
    i feel like i'm stealing the time not being bold
    why do we have to meet when it is dark in the night
    when day light is ever so bright
    there is a place beyond here i look to attend
    whatever the meaning of this is
    i want it to end
    give a reason to stay and meet you in the day
    to be with you is a treat
    when i come to meet with you my heart does speak loud
    but then, when i look around to find
    you are behind that wall and appear
    my heart shuts  down and i begin to fear
    what are you hiding that you cannot share
    i want our meeting to be in a place beyond here
    make that happen i plead with you not to despair
    but look at our meeting and tell me this
    are you not longing for the day as well as the night
    to give me a kiss
    a place beyond here i know will be better than this

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    danmartyjake1 commented on a place beyond here

    02-27-2010

    Interesting write about private encounters and wanting them to be more in the day and what not. I liked the danger or wanton sense you developed, about the meetings, with your style. Very mystifying!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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