A Mind's Thought (Limbotic Dreams/Limbotic Visions)

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    A Mind's Thought (Limbotic Dreams/Limbotic Visions)

    Trapped in a moment,
    A moment of a thought.
    The thought of a memory.

    It fades in & out or comes & goes, whether clear or unclear, it is of memory, a picture or scene.
    It plays, over & over at times.

    Motionless, I be, still I can see that u are not, as if in haste, a blur past me. Then, I fade into another thought.

    Looking at me, starring at u, as if we were making love & something wrong was said, such a cold stare. That look as if u were wondering of me or even plotting.

    Unclear, I awake to you, your eyes closed, I think, what a fucked up dream, what a fucked up vision. I sigh, close my eyes & it begins again.

    Motionless, I be, only to think & I see,
    Of memory, a picture or scene, a memory of thought,
    the thought of a moment.

    A moment I'm trapped in, as if, frozen in this dreamstate, until it completes.

    It plays over & over....at times adding, but, only when I close my eyes, then.. it begins again.

    Re-occurring visions of dreams, suggest that the mind is trying to show what has been forgotten or what is about to happen.

    -Solution # 9

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    Tempy commented on A Mind's Thought (Limbotic Dreams/Limbotic Visions)

    09-14-2009

    maybe its trying to say doesn't matter what you think the outcome will be you will never predict it, you have to experience it to know... or let it go

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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