A Body So Torn

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A Body So Torn

A body so torn, a mind so mixed up.
The pain unbearable for one's soul.
I can not go on as others say.
It has to end some how some way.
The ups and downs to hard to handle.
A heart of pieces not of a whole.
Each piece belongs to a memory hard to let go.
Memories so bad it is hard to share.
If I express my feelings, they say to cope.
That I can not learn as much as I try.
Please let me go I don't want it anymore.
Let me not wake to another day.
I am ready so ready to go.

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hotnat123 commented on A Body So Torn

10-20-2010

Very real. i could see it came from an honest place.

Platti commented on A Body So Torn

05-13-2009

Very poignant, it's as if I am the person describing their feelings in the poem, thank you for posting

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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