1 t3AR...

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    1 t3AR...

    A tear is like a drop of rain,that never disappers. From the skies from down our cheeks; to the ground like our feet. One by one flooding my room. Not knowing what the problem is; Crying everyday. People asking me questions. They wanting me to answer, but cant seem to open my mouth. They just looking around wondering; Me, Im just listening as they  just ask. Not knowing what's going to happen next. They've just shown my future; Now Im gone. A tear is like a drop of rain, that never disappears. From the skies; From down our cheeks. To the ground like our feet. This is the end, from the pastto the future. Nine months later, big responsibilities. Gone then disappeared... 

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    jesusfreake commented on 1 t3AR...

    08-17-2009

    AWESOME.....very great read...I was intruguied from the beginning to the end....this poem captured my attention and ur grammar is nicely done as well...I give it a 10 because thats truly what it deserves..!!

    Mrpoetry commented on 1 t3AR...

    08-07-2009

    very good poem and stay encouraged with Jesus. He will lead and guide you always. keep writing

    Kassandra

    08/07/2009

    thank you

    scrye commented on 1 t3AR...

    08-06-2009

    Very emotional once again and a great read thanks for sharing pieces of yourself with us as you begin your journey as a writer. Keep posting.

    Kassandra

    08/06/2009

    thanks really

    DeepEclipse commented on 1 t3AR...

    06-29-2009

    Sounds a bit like a song with the repeating chorus. I actually love the rain, due to its honesty. This poem expressed something I relate to deeply.....people's misunderstandings. Take care.

    Kassandra

    06/29/2009

    Thanx you too

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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