Yours from the First

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Yours from the First

 

Newborn lovers swaddled in gossamer expectations

In a whitewashed tower room above the rivers rush

Words of hope exchanged in whispered incantations

Tangled sheets and bodies subside to a sacred hush

 

Two novices hand to hand in prayerful supplication

Fearful to receive nothing or all that they requested

Fragile vows pilot a tremulous flight of imagination

Undertakings of constancy made but as yet untested

 

Swathed by the mists that rise on a Cam-side dawn

Passion turns to adoration as a couple dread to part

Willing hearts rush in where experience would warn

Anxiety and optimism; were every story has its start

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Shinji commented on Yours from the First

11-17-2009

once again this is a great poem. i must agree with Doninha. Shakespeare would want to clam this as his own. THis would have been a great poem to perfect romeo and juliet. You are a great writer and very creative

Doninha commented on Yours from the First

10-18-2009

MAGNIFICENT, EXALTED, NOBLE, AWE-INSPIRING!!!! Shakespeare would have tried to claim this as his own! I would love to hear this poem recited by you. It begs to be heard.

icu2 commented on Yours from the First

10-18-2009

Oh, this is so different. I was afraid you were going to have them do the swan song thing in the last refrain. Glad it ended so pretty. Very nice poem.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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