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    You

    Baby please, help me outta this place,

    Monster in my head I can't escape,

    These long winded battles I fight,

    Lying alone in bed tonight,

    You always listen, I never learn,

    I'm so diffident without you, For your touch I yearn,

    Damn it I cannot function,

    Cry like a baby, Lost like a child,

    From these demons only you hold the key,

    Come help me chase them from here eternally,

    Only your whisper can heal this wound inside me,

    Damn it I need you beside me,

    Save me again from this ugly place,

    I need you, want you, miss your green eyes & your face.

     

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    bryanpaul86 commented on You

    03-19-2010

    I like it. It has a raw, masculine, edge which is very different than the way I write, but very personal and cool. Keep at it.

    hippiegirl commented on You

    03-15-2010

    good words. painful. fix what is broken and it will be ok........

    jansolo commented on You

    02-22-2010

    I know how hard it is to lose someone you truly love, but they always say if you love someone let them go and if they come back it will mean so much more. Be strong it will be ok!

    DylanClark

    02/23/2010

    thank you. I still havn't heard from her

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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